My homwork

2012-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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A:Hi Mary. I did't see you at school last Monday. B:Hello, Bob. I did't come on Monday. I wasn't felt well, so I decided to go to the doctor. A: Oh! Was it serious? B: No, the doctor examined me and told me that I had the flu. He prescribed some medicine and told me to go home and rest. A: Did you stay home all day las Monday? B: No, only in the morning. I had to work in the afternoon and gess what? A: What? B:When a friend drove me home, he crashed his car. He did't see the red light. A: Did anyone get hurt? B: Thack God, nobody did. A: I'm happy to hear that. Well, Mary. I have to rush now. While I was listening to your story, I remembered that my wife asked me to go to the mechanical to get our car. See you later and take care! B; You too

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Good job with your homework. Thank you for giving an effort for this. I hope you learned something new. See you in class! T. Aurora A:Hi Mary. I did\'t see you at school last Monday. >>Correct!B:Hello, Bob. I did\'t come on Monday. I wasn\'t felt well, so I decided to go to the doctor. >>Hello, Bob. I (didn\'t come)  on Monday. I wasn\'t (feeling)  well, so I (decided)  to go to the doctor.A: Oh! Was it serious? >>Correct!B: No, the doctor examined me and told me that I had the flu. He prescribed some medicine and told me to go home and rest. >>Correct!A: Did you stay home all day las Monday? >>Correct! B: No, only in the morning. I had to work in the afternoon and gess what? >>Correct!A: What?B:When a friend drove me home, he crashed his car. He did\'t see the red light. >>When a friend (drove/was driving)  me home, he (crashed)  his car. He (didn\'t see)  the red light.A: Did anyone get hurt? >>Correct!B: Thack God, nobody did. >>Correct!A: I\'m happy to hear that. Well, Mary. I have to rush now. While I was listening to your story, I remembered that my wife asked me to go to the mechanical to get our car. See you later and take care! >>Correct!B; You too

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