My honest feedbacks after taking a class from Power English.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I am not bad at listening. This is because a Korean English education focuses on reading and listening.
But it was my mistake. Actually, I am accustomed to understanding the formal dialogue and the structures of sentences which I have heard a lot. Owing to my class, I figured out that I also need to practice listening as well as speaking English. Because my teacher uses lots of various and simple structures for me. So, It makes me try to listen to her words carefully and figure them out. If it is possible, I try to memorize them. For example, I started to talk about my friend\'s event on this weekend. But it is difficult to discribe it in English and even it is rare for us to face. It helped me a lot.
There is another good point of this class. she always waits for me to talk about my story for myself. Eventually, I endeavored to make my sentences and combinate words to express my thoughts. It helped me to get used to speaking fluently and naturally more and more.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] ^^
I\'m not expecting this message form you but I am deeply overwhelmed to hear these words from you. It\'s my happiness as a teacher to hear from my student that I\'m helping them in learning English. The reason why I always tell you to try even if you always say that it\'s so hard to tell your stories in English is because I want you to try. The sentence probably is messed up but at least you tried. It is my job to understand and try to dig deep to your ideas so that at the end you\'ll be able to explain it in English. Again thank you so much for appreciating what I do to help you.
A happy Teacher Annie
I think I am not bad at listening. This is because a Korean English education focuses on reading and listening.
>>CORRECT
But it was my mistake. Actually, I am accustomed to understanding the formal dialogue and the structures of sentences which I have heard a lot.
>>But it was my mistake because I am used in understanding the formal dialogues and structures of sentences that I usually hear.
Owing to my class, I figured out that I also need to practice listening as well as speaking English.
>>CORRECT
Because my teacher uses lots of various and simple structures for me.
>>My teacher gives me various kinds of sentences with simple structures.
So, It makes me try to listen to her words carefully and figure them out. If it is possible, I try to memorize them.
>>It drives me to listen to her words carefully to be able to figure them out. If possible, I try to memorize them.
For example, I started to talk about my friend\'s event on this weekend. But it is difficult to discribe it in English and even it is rare for us to face. It helped me a lot.
>>For example, I started to talk about my friend\'s event last weekend but I find it difficult to describe in English. This event is a rare situation but she helped me on it.
There is another good point of this class. she always waits for me to talk about my story for myself.
There is another good point of this class. she always waits for me to talk about my story for myself.
>>There is another good point of this class; she always waits for me to finish talking about my story before she talks.
Eventually, I endeavored to make my sentences and combinate words to express my thoughts. It helped me to get used to speaking fluently and naturally more and more.
>>As a result, I always try to make a good sentence, combining words to express my thoughts. It helped me to speak fluently and naturally.
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