My hope

2015-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

Mum told me that if I get all full marks on my test she will do any thing that I want to do. So I am trying to study really hard to get all full marks. I want to get magic card, nintendo DS,bycle that is cycle.The one that I want to get is nintendo DS because I can play with my friends and have a good and enjoyable time. I can muilty play with my friends. I just hope that I get fullmark on my test.

강사 첨삭

Hi there MIN!   It\'s a good thing that you\'re mom will give you the thing that you want once you get full marks on your test. But then, you should always study hard whether or not there\'s a reward from your parents. If as early as now, you\'ll do well in school, you won\'t have much problem in entering middle school or high school where competition for class ranking will be fiercer. I\'m not saying that you necessarily need to compete but just ALWAYS do your best in everything you do including tests or examinations.:-)   =Teacher Mayleen=   Mum told me that if I get all full marks on my test she will do any thing that I want to do. >> My mom told me that if I get all full score on my test, she will do anything that I want.   So I am trying to study really hard to get all full marks. >> So I\'m studying really hard to get all full marks.   I want to get magic card, nintendo DS,bycle that is cycle. >> I want to get new magic cards and a Nintendo DS.   The one that I want to get is nintendo DS because I can play with my friends and have a good and enjoyable time. >> The one that I really want to have is Nintendo DS so I can have an enjoyable time with my friends while playing it.   I can muilty play with my friends. >> I can use multiplay with my friends.   I just hope that I get fullmark on my test. >> I just hope that I get full marks on my test.

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