My household chorses is just two!
학생이 쓴 원문
My household chorses are first, clean my room myself, and second, put spoon, and chopstick in the desk when we have dinner. I think cooperation is the most important thing to get the housework done smoothly and well. This is because I think it\'s unfair to do all the chores on my own. Honestly, we all eat together and we all are dizzy, but I think it\'s not right to do it alone.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Maria!
There is strength in unity. We can finish a work if we help each other. This is always true at home. So be helpful and do your chores well all the time.
I know you are very helpful.
See you soon!
-T. Donna =)
>> My household chores are first, clean my room by myself, and second, to put spoon and chopstick in the desk when we have dinner.
I think cooperation is the most important thing to get the housework done smoothly and well.
>> Correct!
This is because I think it\'s unfair to do all the chores on my own.
>> Correct!
Honestly, we all eat together and we all are dizzy, but I think it\'s not right to do it alone.
>> Correct!
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