my howork in 8, Feb.
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Today's homework is..
Use the following Idiomatic expressions in a sentence.
loose cannon / when pigs fly / hands down
Our company got hands down the huge project which is to designing of vehicle museum in Korea.
But, we have run into a loose cannon serious problem that is structural.
If we don't solve this problem, we can't design the monumantal museum.
Last night, I said to u 'If I finish my company, I can stop the smoking.'
But, my pronunciation was not good, so u didn't well hear words.
Hmm..my words mean 'I can stop the smoking when I quit business. because I get lots of stress on my office.'
Anyway, Have good evening! and See u later~!!
강사 첨삭
Mr. [이름],
Thank you for the clarification.I think I didn\'t hear you clearly when you said that statement. I haven\'t been into a business so I don\'t know how much stressful you can get from it. But everytime I feel stress I try to find a way to relieve my stress just like swimming or eating.(that is why I\'m gaining a lot of weight this past few days.hahaha).
Here are my corrections and see you later.
T.Sheela
Today\'s homework is..
>>Correct!Use the following Idiomatic expressions in a sentence.loose cannon / when pigs fly / hands downOur company got hands down the huge project which is to designing of vehicle museum in Korea.
>>Our company got hands down the huge project which is to design a vehicle for the museum in Korea.But, we have run into a loose cannon serious problem that is structural.
>>But we had loose cannon problem on the structures. If we don\'t solve this problem, we can\'t design the monumantal museum. >>If we don\'t solve this problem, we can\'t design the monumental museum.
Last night, I said to u \'If I finish my company, I can stop the smoking.\'
>>Last night, I told you that, \'\"If I finish my work in the company, I can stop smoking.\"But, my pronunciation was not good, so u didn\'t well hear words.
>> But, my pronunciation was not good,so I think you didn\'t hear me well.Hmm..my words mean \'I can stop the smoking when I quit business. because I get lots of stress on my office.\' >>Hmm..what I mean is,\"I can stop smoking once I quit my business, because I get a lot of stress in my office.\"Anyway, Have good evening! and See u later~!!
>>Anyway, Have good evening and See u later~!!
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