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2012-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Lorraine

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1.We should not be late to the party.(shouldn't) 2.I would not call out if I was you.(wouldn't) 3.He could not remember the name of his grade teacher.(couldn't) 4.She is not listening to the directions.(isn't) 5.Mary and Clark will not be able to make it the show.(won't) It’s too easy. These problems aren’t homework for me. I just took i min. These sentences are one of my answers at last night. Please, check the wrong points. I had been traveled several cities in other countries and many domestic places. For example, when I went to London, I could stay there forever. And, while I stayed in Innsbruck in Austria, I deluded myself that I was in movie. I really hope live a strange city like London. I love to travel with my friends, but sometimes enjoy alone. What traveling with friends is exciting and unpredictable. On the other hands, when I have travel alone I can think myself, look back to my life and behold my future. Therefore I love to both. thx!

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Thank you for spending some of your time answering your homework. I hope that you will continue to write something in your composition board. I made some modifications in your letter. The answer key is also given below. Please read and study the following:   1.We should not be late to the party.(shouldn\'t) >> Correct! :)2.I would not call out if I was you.(wouldn\'t)>> Correct! :) 3.He could not remember the name of his grade teacher.(couldn\'t)>> Correct! :) 4.She is not listening to the directions.(isn\'t)>>Correct! :) 5.Mary and Clark will not be able to make it the show.(won\'t)>>Correct! :)It’s too easy. These problems aren’t homework for me. I just took i min.>> It\'s too easy. This contraction exercise isn\'t a homework for me. It took me only one minute to answer. (Sentence Construction) These sentences are one of my answers at last night. >> The following sentences are my asnwers last night. (Sentence Construction)  Please, check the wrong points. >> Correct! :)I had been traveled several cities in other countries and many domestic places. >> I have traveled several cities in other countries and many domestic places. (Verb) For example, when I went to London, I could stay there forever. >> For example, when I went to London, I felt like I could stay there forever. (Missing words) And, while I stayed in Innsbruck in Austria, I deluded myself that I was in movie.>> Moreover, when I stayed in  Innsbruck in Austria, I deluded myself that I was in movie. (Choice of word) I really hope live a strange city like London. >> I really hope to live in a strange city like London.  (Missing words)I love to travel with my friends, but sometimes enjoy alone.>> I love to travel with my friends, but sometimes enjoy to travel alone. (Missing words) What traveling with friends is exciting and unpredictable. >> It is exciting and unpredictable to travel with my friends.  (Sentence Construction)  On the other hands, when I have travel alone I can think myself, look back to my life and behold my future.>> On the other hand, when I travel alone, I can reflect on my life: my past experience and my future plans.  (Sentence Construction)  Therefore I love to both.>> Therefore, I love to travel on both ways.  (Sentence Construction) thx! >> Thanks! (Spelling)

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