My idea about plastic surgery
학생이 쓴 원문
I never tried to plastic surgery.
I am not excellent girl but I am satisfied my face and body.
Most female entertainers and some male entertainers had plastic surgery in Korea.
It has a bed effect general people.
I think there are many important things in life.
Nothing is more important than personality.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Mi [이름]!
Wow, I like your composition today. You have bright ideas about having a plastic surgery. Yes, you are absolutely right same as beauty is useless, character is the bes. See you on Monday, Mi [이름]!^^
I never tried to plastic surgery.
>>>I never tried to have plactic surgery.I am not excellent girl but I am satisfied my face and body.
>>>I am not a perfect woman but I am satisfied with my fave and body.Most female entertainers and some male entertainers had plastic surgery in Korea.
>>>correct sentenceIt has a bed effect general people.
>>>It has a bad effect generally to people.I think there are many important things in life.
>>>correct sentenceNothing is more important than personality.
>>>correct sentence
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