My idea about plastic surgery

2011-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

I never tried to plastic surgery. I am not excellent girl but I am satisfied my face and body. Most female entertainers and some male entertainers had plastic surgery in Korea. It has a bed effect general people. I think there are many important things in life. Nothing is more important than personality.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Mi [이름]! Wow, I like your composition today. You have bright ideas about having a plastic surgery. Yes, you are absolutely right same as beauty is useless, character is the bes. See you on Monday, Mi [이름]!^^   I never tried to plastic surgery. >>>I never tried to have plactic surgery.I am not excellent girl but I am satisfied my face and body. >>>I am not a perfect woman but I am satisfied with my fave and body.Most female entertainers and some male entertainers had plastic surgery in Korea. >>>correct sentenceIt has a bed effect general people. >>>It has a bad effect generally to people.I think there are many important things in life. >>>correct sentenceNothing is more important than personality. >>>correct sentence

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