My ideal boyfriend

2010-08-24 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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Many times, I think about my boyfriend in my future. As I think that , my lists of ideal boyfriend become longer and longer...I am not considering of appearance, because that isn't important. I think, the most important thing is a personality such as kind and thoughtful.And I like smart man, so I hope my boyfriend is very smart. And his job is also important,I think he already has a good job,because he is smart.I wish to meet boyfriend who has these conditions.

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Hi [이름], Wow!!Cool I like it, haha. I agree with you physical  appearance is not important. What is important is  what he possesses deep inside. Hmm I wish you can find him soon. See you tomorrow, -- Connie --   Many times, I think about my boyfriend in my future. >> For many times, I think of my future boyfriend. As I think that , my lists of ideal boyfriend become longer and longer. >> As I’m thinking about it, my list of my standard boyfriend becomes longer and longer. ..I am not considering of appearance, because that isn't important. >> I’m not considering on the physical appearance because it isn’t important. I think, the most important thing is a personality such as kind and thoughtful. >> Correct And I like smart man, so I hope my boyfriend is very smart. >> Correct And his job is also important, >> His job is also important. I think he already has a good job,because he is smart. >> I’m expecting that he has a good job because of course he is smart. I wish to meet boyfriend who has these conditions. >> Correct

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