My ideal girl
학생이 쓴 원문
Long hair, big eyes ,slim body, kind and rich. This is my ideal
girl. My ideal girl have to be rich and very very kind. That's most
important thing to me.
강사 첨삭
Hi John,
That's a very short but straight forward composition. I hope you find your ideal girl.
Have a great day.
Teacher May
Long hair, big eyes ,slim body, kind and rich.
>>She should have long hair, big eyes ,slim body, kind and rich.
This is my ideal girl.
>>CORRECT
My ideal girl have to be rich and very very kind.
>>My ideal girl have to be rich and very kind.
That's most important thing to me.
>>CORRECT
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