MY ideal house
학생이 쓴 원문
2floor house.
The color of the house is green.
I will plant trees and flowers around my house.
I don't care about the inside design.
There are 3bedroom,2bathroom,large livingroom and large kitrchen.
강사 첨삭
Hi John,
Thank you for making your homework promptly. I hope that your next composition will be longer. Good luck to your green house.
Teacher May
2floor house.
>>I would like to have a two-storey house.
The color of the house is green.
>>CORRECT
I will plant trees and flowers around my house.
>>I will have a garden with flowers and trees.
I don't care about the inside design.
>> I don't care about the design inside my house.//I don't care about the interior design.
There are 3bedroom,2bathroom,large livingroom and large kitrchen.
>> There will be three bedrooms, two bathrooms, a spacious living room and a wide kitchen.
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