My ideal wedding

2010-08-25 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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I never think about my wedding,it is a little difficult to me. If I am getting married, my wedding become a beautiful scene,because it is only one time in my life. I want to have lots of beautiful lights in the hall,people and happy moods. And above all, my mind is the most important.I want to get married with happy mind.If there is it, My wedding becomes most beautiful ceremony.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], This is quite nice and peaceful haha. I also want it to be held in a beach maybe a sunset Wedding ceremony. It looks romantic, hmmm I’ll ask more of it tomorrow. Take care, -Connie-   I never think about my wedding,it is a little difficult to me. >> I never thought about my wedding, because it’s too difficult for me.  If I am getting married, my wedding become a beautiful scene,because it is only one time in my life. >> If I’ll get married, my wedding will be a beautiful ceremony because it happens once in a life time. I want to have lots of beautiful lights in the hall,people and happy moods. >> I want to have a lot of beautiful lights in the hall to brighten up the people’s mood. And above all, my mind is the most important.I want to get married with happy mind If there is it, >> Above all, I have to set up my mind because it the most important thing. My wedding becomes most beautiful ceremony. >> My wedding will be the most beautiful ceremony.

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