My inportant jobs。
학생이 쓴 원문
I thought my future nowadays。
but I want to have a special jobs。
so,I thought and thought to have a good jobs。
then,I thought that my dream is great to be a English teacher!^∼^
but I also want to be a great writer。
But I have to write well,and I must don't give up to write things!..
so,I give up to be the writer....
somehow,someday.. My dreams will come true....
and I will be the famous English teacher in futures....
강사 첨삭
Hi there wonderful and pretty [이름]!! I am so happy that you can make compositions or letters pretty fast and I like the ideas you share. ^^,
Good job awhile ago in class. ^^ Have a very great Monday night!
~ T. Christine
I thought my future nowadays.>> I am thinking about my future nowadays.but I want to have a special jobs.>> But I wanted to have a special job.so,I thought and thought to have a good jobs.>> So I thought and thought about possible good jobs that I can have.then,I thought that my dream is great to be a English teacher!^∼^>> Then, I thought that my dream is to become a great English teacher!but I also want to be a great writer.>> But, I also wanted to be a great writer.
-- [이름], I think you have the potential to be a good writer. Keep it up!! But I have to write well,and I must don't give up to write things!..>> But I have to write well and I must constantly practice my writing skills.so,I give up to be the writer....>> So, I gave up my dream of becoming a writer.somehow,someday.. My dreams will come true....>> Somehow, someday, my dreams will come true.
-- Yes, [이름]… I believe they will. ^^,and I will be the famous English teacher in futures....
>> I will become the most famous English teacher of all time.
-- Aja!!!!! You can do it!!
~ T. Chris >_<
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