My inportant jobs。

2011-04-04 · 첨삭 강사 Ella

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I thought my future nowadays。 but I want to have a special jobs。 so,I thought and thought to have a good jobs。 then,I thought that my dream is great to be a English teacher!^∼^ but I also want to be a great writer。 But I have to write well,and I must don't give up to write things!.. so,I give up to be the writer.... somehow,someday.. My dreams will come true.... and I will be the famous English teacher in futures....

강사 첨삭

Hi there wonderful and pretty [이름]!! I am so happy that you can make compositions or letters pretty fast and I like the ideas you share. ^^,  Good job awhile ago in class. ^^ Have a very great Monday night!  ~ T. Christine   I thought my future nowadays.>> I am thinking about my future nowadays.but I want to have a special jobs.>> But I wanted to have a special job.so,I thought and thought to have a good jobs.>> So I thought and thought about possible good jobs that I can have.then,I thought that my dream is great to be a English teacher!^∼^>> Then, I thought that my dream is to become a great English teacher!but I also want to be a great writer.>> But, I also wanted to be a great writer.     -- [이름], I think you have the potential to be a good writer. Keep it up!! But I have to write well,and I must don't give up to write things!..>> But I have to write well and I must constantly practice my writing skills.so,I give up to be the writer....>> So, I gave up my dream of becoming a writer.somehow,someday.. My dreams will come true....>> Somehow, someday, my dreams will come true.   -- Yes, [이름]… I believe they will. ^^,and I will be the famous English teacher in futures.... >> I will become the most famous English teacher of all time. -- Aja!!!!! You can do it!!    ~ T. Chris >_<

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