My Interview story (I will send answers of the questions in skype.)
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I had a phone interview at lunch time. I\'m not sure whether I got accepted. Actually, I already had expected English questions. But, in the interview,It was \"There is a advice you got from manager or coworker.\" It was hard to talk advice episod better than speak in English. The English question was just one. After speaking English answer, I had a regret. So, I spoke interviewer that I have studied English every day using on-line class and app. If I get a pass, there are two interviews. Fist, there is a interview with a Marketing manager. Second, Interview with head of the depart. The head of the depart is a foreigner. It will be going under English. How about we prepare the English interview in on-line class. Independently the feedback, I should prepare the English interview. When I just finished the interview, my feeing was like \"OMG, what I told that.\" I talk with my close coworker. I told the story. at that time, when I reviewed the interview, I thought that It was not bad?!
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for sending! Have a good night!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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I had a phone interview at lunch time.
>> Correct!
I\'m not sure whether I got accepted.
>> Correct!
Actually, I already had expected English questions.
>> Correct!
But, in the interview, It was \"There is a advice you got from manager or coworker.\"
>> But, in the interview, I was asked \"If there was an advice I got from a manager or a coworker.\" OR But, in the interview, I was asked \"If there was any advice I got from a manager or a coworker.\"
It was hard to talk advice episod better than speak in English.
>> It was hard to express the advice in English.
The English question was just one.
>> Correct!
After speaking English answer, I had a regret.
>> After saying the English answer, I had a regret. OR After answering in English, I had regrets.
So, I spoke interviewer that I have studied English every day using on-line class and app.
>> So, I told the interviewer that I am studying English every day through an online class and an app.
If I get a pass, there are two interviews.
>> If I pass, there are two more interviews. Or If I pass, there will be two more follow-up interviews.
Fist, there is a interview with a Marketing manager.
>> First, there is an interview with a Marketing manager.
Second, Interview with head of the depart.
>> Second, an interview with head of the department.
The head of the depart is a foreigner.
>> The head of the department is a foreigner.
It will be going under English.
>> It will be in English. OR The interview will be in English.
How about we prepare the English interview in on-line class.
>> How about we prepare the English interview in the online class?
Independently the feedback, I should prepare the English interview.
>> Independently the feedback, I should prepare for the English interview.
When I just finished the interview, my feeing was like \"OMG, what I told that.\"
>>When I just finished the interview, my feeing was like \"OMG, what did I say?\"
I talk with my close coworker. I told the story.
>>I talk with my closest coworker and I told her the story.
at that time, when I reviewed the interview, I thought that It was not bad?!
>> At that time, when I reviewed the interview, I thought that it was not bad?!
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