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Hello! My name is [Name] woong. and my english name is Rooney. Nice to meet you. I am a university student. and my major is electronics. On the vacation, I plan to study english very hard. because I should accompish my toeic score than 850. Otherwise,after receiving a bachelor's degree, I can't apply for the company that I wish. If you have a chance intensive trade , I will do. furthermore, I wish that my english pronounce is changed. I appreciate if you monitor that carefully. Although my sentence is poor, you have strived to read them. Thank you for your efforts.

Hello there^_^ Thank you so much for sending your composition.^_^ I appreciate that you told me something about yourself. I will do my very best to help you improve your English. I\'ll talk with you later^_^ T. Sally Hello! My name is [Name] woong. >>>CORRECTand my english name is Rooney. >>>And my English name is Rooney.Nice to meet you. >>>CORRECTI am a university student. and my major is electronics. >>>I am a University student and my major is Electronics.On the vacation, I plan to study english very hard.because I should accompish my toeic score than 850. >>>On the vacation, I plan to study English very hard because I should achieve my TOEIC score which is more than 850.Otherwise,after receiving a bachelor\'s degree, I can\'t apply for the company that I wish. >>>Or else I can\'t apply for the company that I wish to work for after receiving a Bachelor\'s degree.If you have a chance intensive trade , I will do. >>>If you will give me an intensive class, I will accept it.furthermore, I wish that my english pronounce is changed. >>>Furthermore, I wish that my English pronunciation will improved.I appreciate if you monitor that carefully. >>>CORRECTAlthough my sentence is poor, you have strived to read them. >>>Althought my sentences are not easy to understand, you still stived to read them.Thank you for your efforts. >>>Or Thank you for your effort.