My introduction

2021-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

학생이 쓴 원문

My name is [이름]. I am forty-three years old. I live in SEOUL. We are three plople in the family. I have a younger brother. Him name is IN HAK. I am a housewife now. I like studying shopping and hang out with my friend.

강사 첨삭

Good morning [이름]! Well done in your homework.

~Teacher Aki^^

My name is [이름].

>> My name is [이름].
I am forty-three years old.

>> CORRECT!

OR>> I am 43.
I live in SEOUL.

>> I live in Seoul.

OR>> I am living in Seoul.
We are three plople in the family.

>> We are three in the family.

I have a younger brother.

>> CORRECT

OR>> I have a younger brother who is younger than me.
Him name is IN HAK.

>> His name is In Hak.

I am a housewife now.

>> CORRECT

OR>> I am home maker/ stay at home mom now.
I like studying shopping and hang out
with my friend.

>> I like studying, shopping and hanging out with my friends.

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