My introduction

2013-12-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Jane^^ I want to introduce myself to you. As you know, My name is [이름]. I am 31 years old. My hobbies are watching American drama, climbing mountains and traveling. Actually, My English name, [이름] named after 24-American drama's character, and your name- Jane is the same as the drama-Mentalist's main character's name :) In that drama, Jane is a man :) I am teaching English grammar to middle or high school stduents. Of course, I have been studying English about for 20 years. But I think My ability of speaking English is very poor and actually I feel embarrassed about it. About two years ago, I did language exchanging with an American co-worker for an year. At that time, my speaking ability looked higher and higher. But, After Quitting that, I feel that it returns back. I think I should have studied continuely. Anyway I hope that I have fun to study English with you And The ability may follow me naturally.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition! I\'m glad to have you as one of my students. Please feel free to raise queries and/or suggestions  in the class. I hope to have fun, interesting, and interactive classes with you. Take care and have a good time! T. JanE ^^ Hi Jane^^>> Correct I want to introduce myself to you.>> Correct As you know, my name is [이름]. >> Correct I am 31 years old.>> Correct My hobbies are watching American drama, climbing mountains and traveling.>> Correct Actually, My English name, [이름] named after 24-American drama\'s character, and your name- Jane is the same as the drama-Mentalist\'s main character\'s name :)>> Actually, my English name, [이름], is a character from the American drama entitled \"24\"; and your name, Jane, is the main character of the drama entitled \"Mentalist\". In that drama, Jane is a man :)>> Correct I am teaching English grammar to middle or high school students.>> Correct Of course, I have been studying English about for 20 years.>> Of course, I have been studying English for about 20 years. But I think my ability of speaking English is very poor and actually I feel embarrassed about it.>> Correct About two years ago, I did language exchanging with an American co-worker for an year. >> About two years ago, I did language exchange with an American co-worker for a year. At that time, my speaking ability looked higher and higher. >> At that time, my speaking ability improved. But, After Quitting that, I feel that it returns back. >> But, after quitting that, I feel like my level is getting low again. I think I should have studied continuely.>> I think I should study continually. Anyway I hope that I have fun to study English with you>> Anyway, I hope that I will have fun studying English with you. And The ability may follow me naturally. >> My natural ability will follow through.

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