My introduction

Hello. Jane. I'm [이름]. I'm pleased to have a class with you. As I told you in our previous class, I'm a lawyer. I have been working in one Korean law firm in six years. Then, this autumn, maybe the end of August or early September, I will leave here for my study in the U.S. This is the reason why I enrolled in your class. During about four months, I need to improve my English, especially speaking skill. I had really hard time to raise my TOEFL score. Eventually, some law schools didn't approve my admission due to my TOEFL speaking. You can freely correct my error in every part of English, like pronounciation, grammer, intonation as well as wierd expressions. Besides, I got married in two years ago and I have a nine month old, execptionally cute and adorable, boy. I hope we can communicate interestingly, not just in relation with a tutor and a student, but between two persons. I appreciate your help in advance. Looking forward to seeing you next Monday. See you soon :)

Hi there, TJ! Thanks for your composition! It\'s a pleasure to have you in my class. I\'m honored that you chose to have class with me. I will do my best to help you. I hope that you will feel comfortable with me in class. Should you have any suggestion or request, please feel free to tell me in class. Let\'s work hard together for your further improvement. I also want to get to know you better, not just as a learner, but as a person.^^ T. JanE ^^ Hello. Jane. >> Hello, Jane. I\'m [이름]. >> Correct I\'m pleased to have a class with you.>> Correct As I told you in our previous class, I\'m a lawyer. >> Correct I have been working in one Korean law firm in six years. >> I have been working in a Korean law firm for six years.  Then, this autumn, maybe the end of August or early September, I will leave here for my study in the U.S.>> This autumn, maybe by the end or August or early September, I will leave for the U.S. for my studies. This is the reason why I enrolled in your class. >> Correct During about four months, I need to improve my English, especially speaking skill. >> For about four months, I need to improve my English, especially my speaking skill.  I had really hard time to raise my TOEFL score. >> I had a really hard time in making my TOEFL score high.  Eventually, some law schools didn\'t approve my admission due to my TOEFL speaking. >> Eventually, some law schools didn\'t approve my admission due to my score in TOEFL speaking.  You can freely correct my error in every part of English, like pronounciation, grammer, intonation as well as wierd expressions.>> You can freely check my mistakes in every part of English, such as pronunciation, grammar, intonation, and weird expressions as well. Besides, I got married in two years ago and I have a nine month old, execptionally cute and adorable, boy. >> I got married two years ago, and I have a nine-month-old, exceptionally cute and adorable, boy.I hope we can communicate interestingly, not just in relation with a tutor and a student, but between two persons.>> Correct I appreciate your help in advance. >> Correct Looking forward to seeing you next Monday.>> Correct See you soon :) >> Correct