My introduction
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
I am [Name][이름] Jung, 18 years old.
>> Correct
I should be a high school student cosidering my age, but I dropped out the school around 5 months ago.
>> I\'m supposed to be a high school student considering my age, but I dropped out of school five months ago.
The reason why I decided to drop out was my parents\' suggestion studying abroad.
>> The reason why I decided to drop out was my parent\'s suggestion for me to study abroad.
The requisite to study abroad is taking IELTS test, and thus I am now preparing for IELTS test.
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Since I enjoyed watching animation in English while young, so I am really good at listening part.
>> Since I enjoyed watching animation in English when I was young, so I am really good at the listening part.
However, compared to listening, speaking is my worst part on my English studying.
>> However, compared to listening, speaking is the worst part of my English skills.
The reason is that I have never met and had a conversation with foreigners.
>> Correct
In conclusion, I would like to become more good at speaking with teacher Glenda.
>> In conclusion, I would like to become better at speaking with teacher Glenda.
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