my investment
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I went to wonju because my other apartment. I rent this to couple. I told you my investment. I and my friend bought two apartment in wonju. I didn`t know investment. so I wanted to know how to invest. and I started with my friend. but I learned little . I was top class in my expert part. but I knew little in this part.
I bought my apartment because He helped. I earned money over one-hundred million.
I told him I was afraid this investment and I didn`t konw how to do.but He told me you didn`t study yet. Actually I didn`t study much. I didn`t understand what I studied investment. Maybe my brain didn`t understand investment. My brain filled IT information.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir John. Thank you for this. Well, it\'s a good thing you got help from someone who is knowledgeable with investments. You did gain income from it, so good for you!
- T. Beth
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I went to wonju because my other apartment. >>> I went to Wonju because of my other apartment.
I rent this to couple.
>>> I rented it out to a couple.
I told you my investment.
>>> I told you about my investment before.
>>> OR: I have mentioned about my investment to you before.
I and my friend bought two apartment in wonju.
>>> I and my friend bought two apartments in Wonju.
I didn`t know investment. so I wanted to know how to invest. and I started with my friend. but I learned little .
>>> I didn\'t know much about investments so I wanted to know the how\'s of investing and I started it with my friend. Although, I learned just a little.
I was top class in my expert part. but I knew little in this part.
>>> I was at the top of the class in my expertise, but I knew little in this part.
I bought my apartment because He helped.
I bought my apartment because He helped.
>>> I bought my apartment because he helped.
>>> OR: I bought my apartment because of his help.
I earned money over one-hundred million.
>>> I earned money for over one-hundred million.
I told him I was afraid this investment and I didn`t konw how to do.but He told me you didn`t study yet.
>>> I told him I was afraid of this investment and I didn`t know what to do, but he told me I haven\'t studied it yet.
Actually I didn`t study much. I didn`t understand what I studied investment.
>>> Actually, I didn`t study much and didn`t understand what I studied in investment.
Maybe my brain didn`t understand investment.
>>> correct
My brain filled IT information.
>>> My brain is filled with IT information.
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