My jealousy

2022-05-03 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Jealousy is one of the emotions that everyone has. Therefore, I would have been jealous of another person\'s life subconsciously. However, I don\'t consciously be jealous someone but I envy someone who is very smart. I also don\'t think jealousy is good for our health.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] Ha!
I can\'t imagine you being jealous of anyone.
You are the most confident person I know.
Thank you for expressing yourself today.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Jealousy is one of the emotions that everyone has.
>> Correct
Therefore, I would have been jealous of another person\'s life subconsciously.
>> Correct
However, I don\'t consciously be jealous someone but I envy someone who is very smart.
>> However, I am sometimes not aware when I\'m jealous of someone but I envy someone who is very smart.
I also don\'t think jealousy is good for our health.
>> Correct

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