My job

2010-04-26 · 첨삭 강사 lina

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When machines get in a trouble , I go there immediately and fix it. Sometimes I make a drawing of some mechanical parts to improve our machines. I like the people who I work with , and I get well paid compared with my friends who works in other company. Generally I am satisfied with my job. But there are some reason why I dislike my job. Since I work in shifts , I usually can't rest in weekend and sometimes I have to work all night When I have my own family , this problem will get more serious to me. Another reason is that I have to work overtime too much. Last month , I did overtime work 16 days per only one month. Each overtime took 4 hours. Nowadays I am planning to move to other department not to work in shifts.

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Hi [이름]. I guess it's a good to know that you have plan of managing your time now. Working lte at night might sacrifice your health also.as well as your social life kkk..Working in Samsung was the greatest goal of workers in Korea.You're lucky to have that position.I'm pretty sure that you deserve that though.enjoy your off,Talk to you tomorrow.   LINA   When machines get in a trouble , >>Correct  I go there immediately and fix it. >>Correct Sometimes I make a drawing of some mechanical parts to improve our machines. >>Correct I like the people who I work with , >> I like the people whom I work with , and I get well paid compared with my friends who works in other company. >>And I am well paid compared to my friends who work in other company.Generally I am satisfied with my job. >>Correct But there are some reason why I dislike my job. >> But there are some reasons why I dislike my job. Since I work in shifts , I usually can't rest in weekend and sometimes I have to work all night >>CorrectWhen I have my own family , this problem will get more serious to me. >>CorrectAnother reason is that I have to work overtime too much. >>CorrectLast month , I did overtime work 16 days per only one month. >>Last month, I did overtime work for 16 days in one month.Each overtime took 4 hours. >>Each overtime has four hoursNowadays I am planning to move to other department not to work in shifts. >>Nowadays I am planning to move to another department and need not to work in shifts.  

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