My job

2020-05-13 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I was at home . i will go to my company . yesterday I was busy because of job. My customer had a problem . other one requested document . all customer said \"i am busy..\". I love job but I don`t like this situation . Sometime I crash and burn. My job request a lot of focus and have a seat for much time. before 15 years I leaved my job. I worked auto repair shop. At that time I was very happy. after 1 years I didn`t this job. because I didn`t consider my physical strength and industry situation.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir John. Thank you for this. There really is no easy job. In all kinds of work, we would definitely go through difficulties. Good luck!

- T. Beth
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I was at home .

>>> correct

i will go to my company .

>>> correct ( I will go to my company. )

yesterday I was busy because of job.

>>> Yesterday, I was quite busy because of my job.

>>> OR: I was busy yesterday with work.

My customer had a problem .

>>> correct

other one requested document .

>>> One customer requested for a document.

all customer said \"i am busy..\".

>>> All customers said they were busy.

I love job but I don`t like this situation .

>>> I love my job but I don\'t like this situation.
Sometime I crash and burn.

>>> Sometimes, I crash and burn.
My job request a lot of focus and have a seat for much time.

>>> My job requires a lot of focus and I have to stay seated for a long time.
before 15 years I leaved my job.

>>> I left my previous job 15 years ago.

I worked auto repair shop.

>>> I worked in an auto-repair shop.

At that time I was very happy.

>>> correct
after 1 years I didn`t this job. because I didn`t consider my physical strength and industry situation.

>>> After a year, I didn\'t do this job because I didn`t consider my physical strength and the situation in the industry.

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