My journey for Europe 2

1. The rain started e. while I was driving home. 2. Bob's car is old h. but he can't afford buying a new one. 3. He was a famous hockey player f. who won last year's race. 4. I wrote many books g. before I was awarded the literature prize. 5. They had to cancel the meeting c. because the director did not show up. 6. No one knows for sure b. when he was young. 7. You won't succeed a. if you don't try hard. 8. Although it was raining d. he went out without an umbrella. We had a great time and I fell a sleep for a long time. When I woke up, It was still night. Even we departed in evening. I looked down some night lights of city. it was beautiful. We arrived at the airport about 9 p.m. we took a subway to find our accommodation. Finally we found the place where we stayed. we unpacked our bags. We felt very special feelings, kinds of nervous and happy. The second day in Europe, We went to the Triumpal Arch. We went to upstair, seeing the road of the paris. It seems like a star.*

Hello there!^____^

I had a great time reading what happened to you in Europe and I can tell that you really enjoyed your time there.

I have a few corrections here for you.^^

Well, if you have the time, review some of it.

See you soon!^^

~t. Nina

1. The rain started e. while I was driving home.

>>Correct!
2. Bob\'s car is old h. but he can\'t afford buying a new one.

>>Correct!
3. He was a famous hockey player f. who won last year\'s race.

>>B
4. I wrote many books g. before I was awarded the literature prize.

>>Correct!
5. They had to cancel the meeting c. because the director did not show up.

>>Correct!
6. No one knows for sure b. when he was young.

>>F
7. You won\'t succeed a. if you don\'t try hard.

>>Correct!
8. Although it was raining d. he went out without an umbrella.
>>Correct!
We had a great time and I fell a sleep for a long time.

>>Correct!
When I woke up, It was still night.

>>Correct!

OR>>When I finally woke up, it was still night time.

 Even we departed in evening.

>>We still departed in the evening.
I looked down some night lights of city.

>>I saw a lot of night lights in the city.

it was beautiful.

>>Correct!
We arrived at the airport about 9 p.m.

>>We arrived at the airport at about 9 AM.

 we took a subway to find our accommodation.

>>We took the subway for us to find where we will be staying.
Finally we found the place where we stayed.

>>Correct!

we unpacked our bags.

>>Correct!
We felt very special feelings, kinds of nervous and happy.

>>We we\'re both happy and nervous.
The second day in Europe, We went to the Triumpal Arch.

>>Correct! On our second day in Europe, we went to the Triumphal Arch.
We went to upstair, seeing the road of the paris.

>>We went upstairs and saw a beautiful road within Paris.
It seems like a star.*

>>Correct!

OR>>It was fascinating.^^