My journey for Europe 3

Oh I almost skipped this page. the road of paris seems like a star. * All the roads met at Triumpal Arch. at the down stair, there was a fire which means the soul of french soldiers. It was impressing. of course, I envy the French army. Once they were called "de Grand"(I don't remember exactly) which means " the great" I thought French has a great pride about their country. and then we visited Rodin museum. Famous for thingking man, the part of "gate of hell" I took some pictures. and we went to "Champ elysees" avenue. there were many vendors and many merchandise. we just kept window shoping and didn't buy anything. because we didn't have enough money. In the accommodation, We got along with Korean people. they also went to paris for fun. and we drunk some wine with them. and the third they we went to Louis 14's palace "Chateau de Vesarilles" The place of Chateau de versarilles was very extensive. It had spent 24 years building these architecture.

Hello there!^^

A pleasant morning:)

You have been to a lot of places in Paris and you have seen a lot of tourist spots too.^^

Anyway, be more careful with your capitalization when writing sentences.

I just checked some of your sentences below. Kindly check them out!^^Thanks!

~~T. Nina^^

Oh I almost skipped this page.
>>Correct!
the road of paris seems like a star. *

>>Correct!

OR>>The road of Paris seems like a star.
All the roads met at Triumpal Arch.

>>All the roads meet at the Triumphal Arch.
at the down stair, there was a fire which means the soul of french soldiers.

>>Downstairs, there was a fire which stands/symbolizes the soul of French soldiers.
It was impressing. of course, I envy the French army.

>>It was impressive. Of course, I envy the French army.
Once they were called \"de Grand\"(I don\'t remember exactly) which means \" the great\"

>>Correct!^^
I thought French has a great pride about their country.
>>I thought that French people have great pride for their country.
and then we visited Rodin museum.

>>Correct!

OR>> And then, we visited the Rodin museum.

Famous for thingking man, the part of \"gate of hell\"

>>It is famous because of the \"gate of hell.\"
I took some pictures. and we went to \"Champ elysees\" avenue.

>>I took some pictures and we went to \"Champ Elysees Avenue.
there were many vendors and many merchandise.

>>There were many vendors and many merchandise.
we just kept window shoping and didn\'t buy anything.because we didn\'t have enough money.

>>We just kept on window shopping but I didn\'t buy anything because we didn\'t have enough money.^^
In the accommodation, We got along with Korean people.

>>Correct!
they also went to paris for fun.

>>Correct!

and we drunk some wine with them.
>>We drank some wine with them.
and the third they we went to Louis 14\'s palace \"Chateau de Vesarilles\"

>>And on the third day, we went to Louis 14\'s palace called \"Chateau de Vesarilles\"
The place of Chateau de versarilles was very extensive.

>>Correct!
It had spent 24 years building these architecture.

>>They spent  24 years building this architecture.^^