My know-how to handle the situation

2024-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jenna

학생이 쓴 원문

I believe that the meaningful time is made when I spend a time with meaningful people. Because of this, it is crucial for me to find the reasons and solve them when my friends couldn\'t make it to an event. If the reason is related to sudden schedule or unexpected situation, then I just rearrange a date And if specific conflict happened, I will make an effort to solve it by contacting related people. To tell you the truth, since I always lead a meeting with friends, I can handle it fluently no matter what the reasons.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ms. [Name] [이름]! I\'m glad to hear that you are good at handling situations like this. It\'s because this situation is quite inevitable in life. Thank you for your diligence to write ^^  I always appreciate it. 
~T. Jenna

I believe that the meaningful time is made when I spend a time with meaningful people.
>>I believe that a meaningful time is made when I spend time with meaningful people.
Because of this, it is crucial for me to find the reasons and solve them when my friends couldn\'t make it to an event.
>>Because of this, it is crucial for me to find out the reasons and solve them when my friends couldn\'t make it to an event.
 or
>> That is why when my friends couldn\'t make it to an event, I try to  find out and understand the reasons and come up with solutions.
If the reason is related to sudden schedule or unexpected situation, then I just rearrange a date.
>>If the reason is related to a sudden schedule change or an unexpected situation, then I simply rearrange the date.
And if specific conflict happened, I will make an effort to solve it by contacting related people.
>>If a specific conflict happens, I will make an effort to solve it by contacting the relevant people.
or
>>In the event of a specific conflict arising, I will actively seek a resolution by contacting the relevant individuals.
To tell you the truth, since I always lead a meeting with friends, I can handle it fluently no matter what the reasons.
>> To tell you the truth, since I always lead meetings with friends, I can handle it fluently no matter what the reasons are.
or
>> Honestly, I always lead meetings with friends, so I can handle it fluently regardless of the reasons.

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