My last adventure
학생이 쓴 원문
My adventure is to cook new food.
A few weeks ago, I decided to challenge a new dish, 호박죽.
I like all kinds of 죽.
The materials of that 호박죽 were pumpkin, rice, beans, milk and others.
Making new food is a hard adventure for me.
The process of making 호박죽 was very complicated and took a long time.
However, it wasn\'t that bad.
Therefore I thought I\'d try another food next time.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
It\'s been a while.
I hope you can become consistent this time.
There are a couple of things you need to remember in the composition.
We\'ll discuss them more tomorrow.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
My adventure is to cook new food.
>> My adventure was cooking a new dish.
A few weeks ago, I decided to challenge a new dish, 호박죽.
A few weeks ago, I decided to challenge a new dish, 호박죽.
>> A few weeks ago, I decided to take the challenge of preparing a new dish, 호박죽.
I like all kinds of 죽.
I like all kinds of 죽.
>> Correct
The materials of that 호박죽 were pumpkin, rice, beans, milk and others.
The materials of that 호박죽 were pumpkin, rice, beans, milk and others.
>> The ingredients of 호박죽 are pumpkin, rice, beans, milk and others.
Making new food is a hard adventure for me.
Making new food is a hard adventure for me.
>> Preparing new dishes is a hard adventure for me.
The process of making 호박죽 was very complicated and took a long time.
The process of making 호박죽 was very complicated and took a long time.
>> The process of cooking 호박죽 was very complicated and it took a long time to finish.
Therefore I thought I\'d try another food next time.
Therefore I thought I\'d try another food next time.
>> Therefore I thought I\'d try another dish next time.
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