My last weekend.

Last weekend , I went to seoul to buy some clothes with my friend. Since there were no seats left on that train when we went to seoul. We bought tickets for standing room. Suprisingly there was karaokes in the train. So we entered a karaoke and sang songs there. We shopped for about 3 hours. I bought a leather jacket and a pair of pants. I was happy to get a leather jacket I had wanted to buy.

Hi hi my dear [이름], ITs a TGI Friday again! And it was so nice reading a composition from you tonight...As the usual case, theres no problem in your writing just continue what your doing.. Keep up the good work! Talk to you later again my dear...   Last weekend , I went to seoul to buy some clothes with my friend. >>correct! (be sure to use capital letters to proper nouns)Since there were no seats left on that train when we went to seoul. >>correct!We bought tickets for standing room. >>correct!Suprisingly there was karaokes in the train. >>Surprisingly there were lots of karaoke in the train.So we entered a karaoke and sang songs there. >>correct!We shopped for about 3 hours. >>correct!I bought a leather jacket and a pair of pants. >>correct!I was happy to get a leather jacket I had wanted to buy. >>correct!