My last weekend

2010-12-01 · 첨삭 강사 BARTE

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It's been a long time all of my best high school firends got together. We went to a market to buy ingredients for pasta and to nimble during our happy night. There was a friends who hasn't come to the meeting for 6 months to prepare for medical school. So, I was very glad to see her and I asked much information about the test since I'm preparing the same one. She looked pretty much tired but also free because she just finished it and is having a free time. We watched TV together and recalled the time we went to Australia in 2008, which is the best trip I've ever had. We shared many details about their relationship with her boy friend. That was a good time that made me relaxed.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],  I'm glad you had a good time with your friends. it's always nice to see old friends. Talk to you again tomorrow. -RJ-   It's been a long time all of my best high school firends got together.  >>It's been a long time since all of my best high school friends got together.  We went to a market to buy ingredients for pasta and to nimble during our happy night.  >>We went to the market to buy ingredients for pasta and to nimble during our happy night.  There was a friends who hasn't come to the meeting for 6 months to prepare for medical school.  >>There was a friend who hasn't come to our meetings for 6 months to prepare for medical school.  So, I was very glad to see her and I asked much information about the test since I'm preparing the same one.  >>So, I was very glad to see her and I asked much information about the test since I'm preparing for the same one. She looked pretty much tired but also free because she just finished it and is having a free time.  >>She looked pretty much tired but also free because she just finished it and was having a free time.  We watched TV together and recalled the time we went to Australia in 2008, which is the best trip I've ever had.  >>We watched TV together and recalled the time we went to Australia in 2008, which was the best trip I've ever had. We shared many details about their relationship with her boy friend.  >>She shared many details about her relationship with her boyfriend.  That was a good time that made me relax. >>correct    

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