my laziness.

2010-03-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

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I didn't do composition last several days. I excused that I was very busy. Yes, I was busy than last months. It was the busiest day since I have had a position as a secretary. during the last months It was okay that I just did secretary. Actually I have a concurrent positon. first one is a secretary. the other one is a worker who position in planning about product. from this month my boss gave me a task about the other position. It made me busy than last months. but If I more diligent, I could do composing. I regret for my lazy. I have knew well that practice makes the genius. From now on, I think I must to be more diligent in studying.

강사 첨삭

[이름], Last time you told me about this new position you were handling, I didn’t understand and get the picture that much. Now, I completely understand why you had been so busy that you were not able to write any compositions. You are going through a tough period at the moment and I want to say you can do it. You are a strong and diligent woman. I am so happy to read some of your compositions again. ^^ Please keep it up!   XOXO, JENNY   Here are the corrections: I didn't do composition last several days. >> I haven’t done any compositions these past few days. I excused that I was very busy. >> I made an excuse of I was very busy. Yes, I was busy than last months. >> Yes, I was busier than last month. It was the busiest day since I have had a position as a secretary. >> I had been busy since I’ve had this secretarial position. during the last months It was okay that I just did secretary. >> In the past few months, my schedule as a secretary was okay. Actually I have a concurrent positon. >>Actually, I have a concurrent position. first one is a secretary. the other one is a worker who position in planning about product. >>The first one is secretarial and the second one is in product planning. from this month my boss gave me a task about the other position. >>From this month, my boss gave me another task and that is handling another position.  It made me busy than last months. but If I more diligent, I could do composing. >>It made me busier but if I become more diligent, I could compose more articles.  I regret for my lazy. >> I regret being lazy. I have knew well that practice makes the genius. >> I have known that practice makes perfect. From now on, I think I must to be more diligent in studying. >> From now in, I must be more diligent in studying.

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