my laziness.
학생이 쓴 원문
I didn't do composition last several days. I excused that I was very busy. Yes, I was busy than last months. It was the busiest day since I have had a position as a secretary. during the last months It was okay that I just did secretary. Actually I have a concurrent positon. first one is a secretary. the other one is a worker who position in planning about product. from this month my boss gave me a task about the other position. It made me busy than last months. but If I more diligent, I could do composing. I regret for my lazy. I have knew well that practice makes the genius. From now on, I think I must to be more diligent in studying.
강사 첨삭
[이름],
Last time you told me about this new position you were handling, I didn’t understand and get the picture that much. Now, I completely understand why you had been so busy that you were not able to write any compositions. You are going through a tough period at the moment and I want to say you can do it. You are a strong and diligent woman. I am so happy to read some of your compositions again. ^^ Please keep it up!
XOXO,
JENNY
Here are the corrections:
I didn't do composition last several days.
>> I haven’t done any compositions these past few days.
I excused that I was very busy.
>> I made an excuse of I was very busy.
Yes, I was busy than last months.
>> Yes, I was busier than last month.
It was the busiest day since I have had a position as a secretary.
>> I had been busy since I’ve had this secretarial position.
during the last months It was okay that I just did secretary.
>> In the past few months, my schedule as a secretary was okay.
Actually I have a concurrent positon.
>>Actually, I have a concurrent position.
first one is a secretary. the other one is a worker who position in planning about product.
>>The first one is secretarial and the second one is in product planning.
from this month my boss gave me a task about the other position.
>>From this month, my boss gave me another task and that is handling another position.
It made me busy than last months. but If I more diligent, I could do composing.
>>It made me busier but if I become more diligent, I could compose more articles.
I regret for my lazy.
>> I regret being lazy.
I have knew well that practice makes the genius.
>> I have known that practice makes perfect.
From now on, I think I must to be more diligent in studying.
>> From now in, I must be more diligent in studying.
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