My lifetime dream.
학생이 쓴 원문
My lifetime dream is doctor.
That is because the doctor can save people time.
My second reason is almost every doctor is very smart.
My third reason is doctor can earn a lot of money.
Finally, the doctor\'s workplace is very comfortable.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your lifetime dream. ^^
- T. Rina
1. My lifetime dream is doctor.
>> My lifetime dream is to be a doctor.
2. That is because the doctor can save people time.
>> That is because a doctor saves lives.
3. My second reason is almost every doctor is very smart.
>> My second reason is a doctor is considered smart.
4. My third reason is doctor can earn a lot of money.
>> My third reason is a doctor can earn a lot of money.
5. Finally, the doctor\'s workplace is very comfortable.
>> CORRECT!
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