My lovely teacher cam

2015-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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it is fortune to see you through this sites. whenever i read your letter i'm so so happy. me and my daughters are waiting for your calling in a whole day. it's really fun and interesting. thank you for opportunity to my dauhters. teacher i have a question. if we go to the philippines, can we meet? ^^ because my husband wants to take a rest for 2 months to our family trip from this weekends. he worked hard.... he needs rest^^ and my kids never go abroad and ride air planes. so we'll have a plan. how to spend our time. in korea, as you know we worried about mers. and we don't go to school. i worried also if i go to philippine, they will worried about us. so just my thinking i wrote. don't thinkg about serious^^ i'll do your homework later. bye. sweet dreams....^^

강사 첨삭

Miss. [Name]!! I missed talking with you today...But I really really really want to you enough for giving such a very good opportunity to talk to your two lovely daughters!!!

You are very lucky and blessed to have daughters like them Miss. [Name]. Rachel is one very smart kid. She talks fluently and she has a wide range of ideas. Your youngest is also very cute!!I can\'t wait to talk to you and your daughters again my dear.

Anyway, I would really love to see and finally meet your family but I still have to ask my managers about it.kkk...^^

I can\'t wait to hear your voice again Miss. [Name]!
Thank you for letting me meet you and your family.

Take care always and have a good night...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

it is fortune to see you through this sites.

>>It is very fortunate to meet you through this site.

whenever i read your letter i\'m so so happy.

>>correct

OR: I feel happy whenever I read your letter.

me and my daughters are waiting for your calling in a whole day.

>>Me and my daughters have been waiting for your call for the whole day.

it\'s really fun and interesting.

>>correct

thank you for opportunity to my dauhters.
>>Thank you for the opportunity you gave to my daughters.
 teacher i have a question.

>>correct

if we go to the philippines, can we meet? ^^ 

>>correct
 because my husband wants to take a rest for 2 months to our family trip from this weekends.

>>Because my husband wants to take a rest for 2 months and have a family trip starting this weekend.

he worked hard.... he needs rest^^ 

>>correct

OR: Since he is working so hard he also needs to rest.

 and my kids never go abroad and ride air planes.

>>correct
 so we\'ll have a plan.

>>correct

how to spend our time.

>>correct

In korea, as you know we worried about mers.

>>correct

and we don\'t go to school.

>>correct

i worried also if i go to philippine, they will worried about us.

>>I also worry that if I go to the Philippines, they will also worry about us.

so just my thinking i wrote.

>>I just wrote my opinion.

don\'t thinkg about serious^^
>>Don\'t take it seriously. ^^
i\'ll do your homework later. bye. sweet dreams....^^

>>correct

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