My lovely teacher cam
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Miss. [Name]!! I missed talking with you today...But I really really really want to you enough for giving such a very good opportunity to talk to your two lovely daughters!!!
You are very lucky and blessed to have daughters like them Miss. [Name]. Rachel is one very smart kid. She talks fluently and she has a wide range of ideas. Your youngest is also very cute!!I can\'t wait to talk to you and your daughters again my dear.
Anyway, I would really love to see and finally meet your family but I still have to ask my managers about it.kkk...^^
I can\'t wait to hear your voice again Miss. [Name]!
Thank you for letting me meet you and your family.
Take care always and have a good night...
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
it is fortune to see you through this sites.
>>It is very fortunate to meet you through this site.
whenever i read your letter i\'m so so happy.
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OR: I feel happy whenever I read your letter.
me and my daughters are waiting for your calling in a whole day.
>>Me and my daughters have been waiting for your call for the whole day.
it\'s really fun and interesting.
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thank you for opportunity to my dauhters.
>>Thank you for the opportunity you gave to my daughters.
teacher i have a question.
>>correct
if we go to the philippines, can we meet? ^^
>>correct
because my husband wants to take a rest for 2 months to our family trip from this weekends.
>>Because my husband wants to take a rest for 2 months and have a family trip starting this weekend.
he worked hard.... he needs rest^^
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OR: Since he is working so hard he also needs to rest.
and my kids never go abroad and ride air planes.
>>correct
so we\'ll have a plan.
>>correct
how to spend our time.
>>correct
In korea, as you know we worried about mers.
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and we don\'t go to school.
>>correct
i worried also if i go to philippine, they will worried about us.
>>I also worry that if I go to the Philippines, they will also worry about us.
so just my thinking i wrote.
>>I just wrote my opinion.
don\'t thinkg about serious^^
>>Don\'t take it seriously. ^^
i\'ll do your homework later. bye. sweet dreams....^^
>>correct
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