my lucky charm?
학생이 쓴 원문
I thought I didn\'t have a lucky charm, but when I looked at my wallet, the paper charm that my mother gave me since I was young was always in my wallet.
It is coated and has strange pictures and Chinese characters.
I always am having it in my wallet because she told me to carry it around.
I know it means a superstition that prevents bad luck rather than a lucky charm.
I carry it allways because it\'s the heart of parents who are worried about their children.
Perhaps, because of the paper charm, I don\'t think I\'ve been sick much and I think I\'m living a healthy and happy life so far.
강사 첨삭
Hi Evan:)
Wow, that sounds nice. I think you are the only student of mine that has a lucky charm. I also have a lucky charm that my parents gave me when I was a child. I still have it until this day too. It\'s more of a guardian charm.
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I thought I didn\'t have a lucky charm, but when I looked at my wallet, the paper charm that my mother gave me since I was young was always in my wallet.
>> I thought I didn\'t have a lucky charm, but when I looked at my wallet, there was paper charm that my mother gave me when I was young and it has always been in my wallet.
It is coated and has strange pictures and Chinese characters.
>> It is coated, has strange pictures and Chinese characters.
I always am having it in my wallet because she told me to carry it around.
>> I always have it in my wallet because she told me to carry it around.
I know it means a superstition that prevents bad luck rather than a lucky charm.
>> I think that this lucky charm is meant to prevent bad luck rather than being a lucky charm.
I carry it allways because it\'s the heart of parents who are worried about their children.
>> I carry it always because it\'s the heart of parents who are worried about their children.
Perhaps, because of the paper charm, I don\'t think I\'ve been sick much and I think I\'m living a healthy and happy life so far.
>> CORRECT
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