My lunch time.
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually have lunch at work.
There is a restaurant near our building.
It takes about 5 minutes walk to get there.
They normally serve 2 kinds of meal.
So we can choose the menu.
I have a lunch with my coworkers.
During lunch time , We usually talk about gossip.
After a meal, I feel sleepy.
Sleeping for about half an hour is big pleasure for me.
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-Teacher JM
I usually have lunch at work.
>>>Correct^^
There is a restaurant near our building.
There is a restaurant near our building.
>>>Correct^^
It takes about 5 minutes walk to get there.
It takes about 5 minutes walk to get there.
>>>It takes about 5 minutes by walking to get there.
They normally serve 2 kinds of meal. So we can choose the menu.
They normally serve 2 kinds of meal. So we can choose the menu.
>>>They normally serve 2 kinds of meals so we can choose the menu.
I have a lunch with my coworkers.
I have a lunch with my coworkers.
>>>Correct^^
During lunch time , We usually talk about gossip.
During lunch time , We usually talk about gossip.
>>>During lunch time, we usually gossip.
After a meal, I feel sleepy.
>>>After a meal, I normally feel sleepy.
Sleeping for about half an hour is big pleasure for me.
Sleeping for about half an hour is big pleasure for me.
>>>Sleeping for about half an hour is a source of big pleasure for me.
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