My lunch time
학생이 쓴 원문
Since I work in the big company, I mostly eat lunch in our company.
There are 3 restaurants.
I go to the restaurant near my office
It serves 2 kinds of food at each meal.
So I can choose one of them.
I and my coworkers talk about some news happened in thesedays
over the meal.
After that, I take a nap on the seat for about 20 minutes.
It helps me to recover from fatigue.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for sending me your composition.Its really nice to know that even though you are such a very hard working guy, you never try to miss a meal..
Anyway, I will do my best to correct this so it may help you improve your English skill.
Have a nice day and take care.
Love lots,
Camille
Since I work in the big company, I mostly eat lunch in our company.>>>Since I work in a big company, I usually eat lunch there. There are 3 restaurants.>>>CorrectI go to the restaurant near my office>>>I go to a restaurant near my office.It serves 2 kinds of food at each meal.>>>They serve 2 kinds of food every meal.
So I can choose one of them.
>>>correct>>>So I choose one of them. (>>better)I and my coworkers talk about some news happened in thesedays over the meal>>>I and my coworkers talk about the news that happened for the past days while having a meal.After that, I take a nap on the seat for about 20 minutes.>>>After eating, I usually take a nap on my chair for about 20 minutes.It helps me to recover from fatigue.
>>>It helps me recover from my fatigue.
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