My lunch time

2010-11-04 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Since I work in the big company, I mostly eat lunch in our company. There are 3 restaurants. I go to the restaurant near my office It serves 2 kinds of food at each meal. So I can choose one of them. I and my coworkers talk about some news happened in thesedays over the meal. After that, I take a nap on the seat for about 20 minutes. It helps me to recover from fatigue.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름], Thank you for sending me your composition.Its really nice to know that even though you are such a very hard working guy, you never try to miss a meal..  Anyway, I will do my best to correct this so it may help you improve your English skill. Have a nice day and take care.  Love lots, Camille  Since I work in the big company, I mostly eat lunch in our company.>>>Since I work in a big company, I usually eat lunch there. There are 3 restaurants.>>>CorrectI go to the restaurant near my office>>>I go to a restaurant near my office.It serves 2 kinds of food at each meal.>>>They serve 2 kinds of food every meal. So I can choose one of them. >>>correct>>>So I choose one of them. (>>better)I and my coworkers talk about some news happened in thesedays over the meal>>>I and my coworkers talk about the news that happened for the past days while having a meal.After that, I take a nap on the seat for about 20 minutes.>>>After eating, I usually take a nap on my chair for about 20 minutes.It helps me to recover from fatigue. >>>It helps me recover from my fatigue.

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