my major
학생이 쓴 원문
I really really love my major, early childhood education.
So I\'m not interested in other fields, and I didn\'t think about them at all so far.
But, I\'m thinking about your question right now.
\"What else would I have majored in if I hadn\'t studied early childhood education?\"
Although my answer can sound ridiculous to you, \"I would have been a nun.\"
The reason is my role model is Mother Teresa.
강사 첨삭
Hello there once again, Professor [이름] Ha!
First of all, thank you so much for taking the time to answer the homework question I asked you in class for today! I truly appreciate your great effort in thinking of what might have been of you if not an early childhood professor. To me, I am not surprised that you would want to become a nun since your tone is so delicate and your heart is very pure. Today, when you told me in class that you wanted to open a kindergarten and share your wisdom about it in the Philippines, I felt that that is so noble and a few people can do charity to others. Like the late Mother Teresa, you posses a heart like hers.
Therefore, kindly go over the sentences you made below. You had an excellent composition with no grammar mistakes. I am joyful to see and read these kinds of work. I will see you again soon. Congratulations to your wonderful homework here and a sincere conversation in class today!
Stay safe always.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
So I\'m not interested in other fields, and I didn\'t think about them at all so far.
>> Correct!
But, I\'m thinking about your question right now.
>> Correct!
\"What else would I have majored in if I hadn\'t studied early childhood education?\"
>> Correct!
Although my answer can sound ridiculous to you, \"I would have been a nun.\"
>> Correct!
The reason is my role model is Mother Teresa.
>> Correct!
Or: The reason, is my role model is Mother Teresa.
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