My major goals in 2020
학생이 쓴 원문
The first one is to be healthy. I have to loose my weight and gain some muscle. I am trying to work out every day, However it is hard to do. Secondly, I want to improve my English skills. That is why I’m taking an English class. The class is really helpful for me. Lastly, I should increase my grade to get a job. So I will concentrate on study in next semester.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. Thanks for sharing.
- T. Gabby :)
The first one is to be healthy.
>> Correct.
I have to lose weight and gain some muscle.
>> I have to lose weight and gain some muscles.
I am trying to work out every day, However it is hard to do.
>> Correct.
Secondly, I want to improve my English skills.
>> Correct.
That is why I’m taking an English class.
>> Correct.
The class is really helpful for me.
>> Correct.
Lastly, I should increase my grade to get a job.
>> Correct.
So I will concentrate on study in next semester.
>> So I have to concentrate with studies next semester.
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