My MBTI

2024-09-20 · 첨삭 강사 Sonny

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I have done it. I took the MBTI test, And I received the result that my MBTI is ENFP. I did it twice, first I got the result of ENFJ, but second, the result said me that I\'m ENFP. In my opinion, I took the first test when I was 19 years old, and that time I had a lot of tasks to do. So making a plan was essential process for me. \"J\" means iclination to keep one\'s plan. But after entering the university, I didn\'t have struggle to do all my tasks. And I can have more my own time than that time. So, naturally my personality typr turns to \"P\". \"ENF\" is set type of my personality. I like hang out with someone, getting energy from other people. And I enjoy imagining simething such as balance game. When we do that game, I always set the situation and ask my friends to choose only one. Fianlly, my emotion fluctuate so often. I feel happy and blue so easily. But basically, I\'m outgoing person and warm-hearted person. So my friends said to me that you are the embodiment of ENFP!\"

강사 첨삭

Hello, Ms. [Name]! I can totally relate to you. I have taken this test at different stages of my life and I have gotten various results. I guess, our personalities could change as we get older.
-T. Sonny
I have done it. 
>>Correct!
I took the MBTI test.
>>Correct!
And I received the result that my MBTI is ENFP. 
>>And, the result claimed that I am [Name].
I did it twice, first I got the result of ENFJ, but second, the result said me that I\'m ENFP. 
>>I took it twice. At first, I got ENFJ, but the second take said that I\'m ENFP.
In my opinion, I took the first test when I was 19 years old, and that time I had a lot of tasks to do. 
>>In my opinion, it was because the first time I took it was when I was 19 and I had a lot of tasks to do that time.
So making a plan was essential process for me. 
>>So, making plans was an essential process for me.
\"J\" means iclination to keep one\'s plan. 
>>\"J\" means inclination to keep one\'s plan. 
But after entering the university, I didn\'t have struggle to do all my tasks. 
>>However, after entering the university, I have never struggled with all my tasks.
And I can have more my own time than that time. 
>>I also have a lot more personal time than before. 
So, naturally my personality typr turns to \"P\".
>>
So, naturally my personality type turns to \"P\".
\"ENF\" is set type of my personality. 
>>\"ENF\" is my determined type of personality. 
I like hang out with someone, getting energy from other people. 
>>I like hanging out with someone as well as getting energy from other people. 
And I enjoy imagining simething such as balance game. 
>>I also enjoy imagining things, the balance game, for instance.
When we do that game, I always set the situation and ask my friends to choose only one. 
>>Correct!
Fianlly, my emotion fluctuate so often. 
>> Finally, my emotions fluctuate so often. 
I feel happy and blue so easily. 
>>I get mood swings so easily.
But basically, I\'m outgoing person and warm-hearted person. 
>>But basically, I\'m an outgoing and a warm-hearted person. 
So my friends said to me that you are the embodiment of ENFP!\"
>>So, my friends told me that I am the embodiment of ENFP!

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