My memorable trip.

2010-11-23 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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The most memorable trip for me was visiting Macao. I went there 2 years ago with my colleagues. I stayed there for 5 days. Though It was a short time,I could see a lot of things. During the daytime, we went around for sightseeing. In night , we went to casino and pub. We could meet foreign people at bar. and we talked about our daily life. Though we couldn't understand each other completely , It was a great time.

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Hello there [이름] my dear, it was really nice receiving very good compositions from you.. Your compositions are very good and impressive!Keep up the good work.. Just continue what youre doing and I know you will be very good in no time I'll talk to you later my dear.. T.Cam The most memorable trip for me was visiting Macao. >>correct!I went there 2 years ago with my colleagues. >>correct!I stayed there for 5 days. >>correct!Though It was a short time,I could see a lot of things. >>correct!During the daytime, we went around for sightseeing. >>correct!In night , we went to casino and pub. >>At night, we visited some casinos and pubsWe could meet foreign people at bar.and we talked about our daily life. >>We could even meet some foreigners at the bar and we talked about our daily life.Though we couldn't understand each other completely ,It was a great time. >>correct!

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