My memorable trip.
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The most memorable trip for me was visiting Macao.
I went there 2 years ago with my colleagues.
I stayed there for 5 days.
Though It was a short time,I could see a lot of things.
During the daytime, we went around for sightseeing.
In night , we went to casino and pub.
We could meet foreign people at bar.
and we talked about our daily life.
Though we couldn't understand each other completely , It was a great time.
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The most memorable trip for me was visiting Macao.
>>correct!I went there 2 years ago with my colleagues.
>>correct!I stayed there for 5 days.
>>correct!Though It was a short time,I could see a lot of things.
>>correct!During the daytime, we went around for sightseeing.
>>correct!In night , we went to casino and pub.
>>At night, we visited some casinos and pubsWe could meet foreign people at bar.and we talked about our daily life.
>>We could even meet some foreigners at the bar and we talked about our daily life.Though we couldn't understand each other completely ,It was a great time.
>>correct!
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