My mind
학생이 쓴 원문
These days,I constantly felt really gloomy.I stayed at home alone all days and only studied and I was becoming closing person.I hardly study under a lot of stress.Then,I decided that I should meet people studying in the library of the school.My friends told me why is your face so serious?What's worng with you?Is there any problem?However,after I start to go to school,especially after I meet my male friends coming back from finishing military service,I totally changed nowadays.I'm excited going school and my mind is growing restless and unstable.Now,it's the problem that I can't concentrate on study.I want to meet friends and hanging out.I'm not sure the reason,but I guess the spring is coming.My mind wonders when spring comes.I don't know how to stop my fickle heart and study hard.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] thanks for expressing your feelings fortoday here. Well I hope you get over being gloomy so that you could focus more on your studies. Take care always, okay!
These days,I constantly felt really gloomy.
>>> These days, I constantly feel really gloomy.
I stayed at home alone all days and only studied and I was becoming closing person.
>>> I stay (at) home alone these past days and only study and I am becoming a closed person.
I hardly study under a lot of stress.Then,I decided that I should meet people studying in the library of the school.
>>>Correct
My friends told me why is your face so serious?What's worng with you?Is there any problem?
>>> My friends asked me ,"Why is your face so serious?What's wrong with you?Is there any problem?"
However,after I start to go to school,especially after I meet my male friends coming back from finishing military service,I totally changed nowadays.
>>>However, after I started going to school, especially after i met my male friends coming back from finishing military service,I totally changed, especially nowadays.
I'm excited going school and my mind is growing restless and unstable.
>>>I'm excited to go to school and my mind is growing restless and unstable.
Now,it's the problem that I can't concentrate on study.
>>> Now, tha problem is that I can't concentrate on my studies.
I want to meet friends and hanging out.
>>> I want to meet friends and hang out.
I'm not sure the reason,but I guess the spring is coming.
>>> I'm not sure of the reason, but I guess it's because spring is coming.
My mind wonders when spring comes.I don't know how to stop my fickle heart and study hard.
>>>Correct
>>>Or: My mind wanders when spring comes.
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