My mind

2010-03-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

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These days,I constantly felt really gloomy.I stayed at home alone all days and only studied and I was becoming closing person.I hardly study under a lot of stress.Then,I decided that I should meet people studying in the library of the school.My friends told me why is your face so serious?What's worng with you?Is there any problem?However,after I start to go to school,especially after I meet my male friends coming back from finishing military service,I totally changed nowadays.I'm excited going school and my mind is growing restless and unstable.Now,it's the problem that I can't concentrate on study.I want to meet friends and hanging out.I'm not sure the reason,but I guess the spring is coming.My mind wonders when spring comes.I don't know how to stop my fickle heart and study hard.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] thanks for expressing your feelings fortoday here. Well I hope you get over being gloomy so that you could focus more on your studies. Take care always, okay! These days,I constantly felt really gloomy. >>> These days, I constantly feel really gloomy. I stayed at home alone all days and only studied and I was becoming closing person. >>> I stay (at) home alone these past days and only study and I am becoming a closed person. I hardly study under a lot of stress.Then,I decided that I should meet people studying in the library of the school. >>>Correct My friends told me why is your face so serious?What's worng with you?Is there any problem? >>> My friends asked me ,"Why is your face so serious?What's wrong with you?Is there any problem?" However,after I start to go to school,especially after I meet my male friends coming back from finishing military service,I totally changed nowadays. >>>However, after I started going to school, especially after i met my male friends coming back from finishing military service,I totally changed, especially nowadays. I'm excited going school and my mind is growing restless and unstable. >>>I'm excited to go to school and my mind is growing restless and unstable. Now,it's the problem that I can't concentrate on study. >>> Now, tha problem is that I can't concentrate on my studies. I want to meet friends and hanging out. >>> I want to meet friends and hang out. I'm not sure the reason,but I guess the spring is coming. >>> I'm not sure of the reason, but I guess it's because spring is coming. My mind wonders when spring comes.I don't know how to stop my fickle heart and study hard. >>>Correct >>>Or: My mind wanders when spring comes.

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