my mistake
학생이 쓴 원문
I know that Seoul mayor changed as a result of this elction.
But that is my fault. About at 7, I didn\'t know the winner had changed due to very narrow gap.
I could not understand why incapable he was elected.
The privileged and wealthy district in Seoul elected him.
He is a conservative opposition party member and oppose the President policies.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Ms. [이름]!
It seems that many people, especially in some of Seoul\'s wealthier districts, preferred his policies and political stance. Even though I may disagree with the outcome, I respect the democratic process and understand that people can have different views on what is best for the city.
Aki~
I know that Seoul mayor changed as a result of this elction.
>> I know that the mayor of Seoul changed as a result of this election
But that is my fault. About at 7, I didn\'t know the winner had changed due to very narrow gap.
>> But that was my mistake. Around 7 o\'clock, I didn\'t realize that the winner had changed because the margin was very narrow.
I could not understand why incapable he was elected.
>> I could not understand why such an incapable person was elected.
The privileged and wealthy district in Seoul elected him.
>> CORRECT!
>> The affluent and wealthy districts of Seoul voted for him.
He is a conservative opposition party member and oppose the President policies.
>> He is a member of the conservative opposition party and opposes the President\'s policies
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