My mom
학생이 쓴 원문
My mom always cleans our house every day.
She always does everythings about house.
First she has to do lundry almost every day and teach me grammer.
She teaches me math every day and checkes the test of it.
She also teaches me English.
Everytimes, after swimming lesson she has to make breakfast for us and she teaches my sister and my friend's brother English after they come home from english academy.
And finally she eats her own breakfast.
I think that my mom is really amazing person who loves me very much.
강사 첨삭
You have a sweet mom. Always obey her and keep her happy.
Please check the corrections.
-Teacher JM
My mom always cleans our house every day.>>>Correct
She always does everythings about house.
>>>She always does everything that needs to be done in the house.
First she has to do lundry almost every day and teach me grammer.
First she has to do lundry almost every day and teach me grammer.
>>>First, she has to do the laundry almost every day. After that, she would teach me grammar.
She teaches me math every day and checkes the test of it.
She teaches me math every day and checkes the test of it.
>>>She teaches me math every day and checks my tests.
She also teaches me English.
She also teaches me English.
>>>Correct
Everytimes, after swimming lesson she has to make breakfast for us and she teaches my sister and my friend's brother English after they come home from english academy.
Everytimes, after swimming lesson she has to make breakfast for us and she teaches my sister and my friend's brother English after they come home from english academy.
>>>Every after my swimming lessons, she has to make breakfast for us. Then she teaches my sister and my friend's brother English after they come home from the English academy.
And finally she eats her own breakfast.
And finally she eats her own breakfast.
>>>She only eats her own breakfast after all those activities.
I think that my mom is really amazing person who loves me very much.
I think that my mom is really amazing person who loves me very much.
>>>I think that my mom is a really amazing person who loves me very much.
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