My mom and dad
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l love my mom and dad.My mom is homemaker,and she is take care me and my littie sister.She`s hobby is walk and try new recipe.
My mother is like friend so we can say like friend,play something,read a book togerther.So l like my mother.
My dad is progremar. he is work in a small company. My father is good at math or quze and he love game called Clash Royale.
He is good at Clash Royale and also adddiction at Clash Royale. And my father is funny so I love my family.Except my little sister.
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Hello, [이름] Ju! ^^
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
Enjoy your the night! :)
~ T. Tricia
l love my mom and dad.
>> CORRECT!
My mom is homemaker,and she is take care me and my littie sister.
>> My mom is a homemaker, and she is taking care of me and my little sister.
She`s hobby is walk and try new recipe.
>> Her hobby is walking and trying new recipes.
My mother is like friend so we can say like friend,play something,read a book together.
>> My mother is like my friend, we can talk like friends, play something, and read books together.
So l like my mother.
>> CORRECT!
My dad is progremar.
>> My dad is a programmer.
he is work in a small company.
>> He works in a small company.
My father is good at math or quze and he love game called Clash Royale.
>> My father is good at math or quiz and he loves playing a game called Clash Royale.
He is good at Clash Royale and also adddiction at Clash Royale.
>> He is good at Clash Royale and also addicted to it.
And my father is funny so I love my family.
>> And my father is funny, so I love my family.
Except my little sister.
>> Except for my little sister.
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