My mom is special person in my life.
학생이 쓴 원문
My mom is the most special person in my life. But sometimes I hated my mother. When my mom said something a little annoying to hear to me, when she criticizes me, when she complains that I did not, when my mom said that it was all my fault, and so on. At that times like this, I was really upset, really unpleasant, and sometimes I wanted to be annoyed by my mom by throwing things, but so far I\'ve never had that. However, there is a reason that even a mother cannot be hated openly, because my mom is a very precious person to me now. Actually, I will have some midterm exam in the last week of this month, and I was very nervous and didn\'t know what to do because it was the first midterm of my life.
My mother is like a guide that shows up when I\'m getting lost in my way, because my mom give some schedule to have good score in my midterm exam. For this reason, my mother is the most important person in my life.
강사 첨삭
Hello Maria!
Mothers can talk and speak so much that can hurt your feelings but that is alright because they only want the best for you and your family. Someday, when you become a mother too, you will understand why a mother always gets angry and talks a lot. That is so many years from now, however.
Thanks for being honest with your answer. See you in class soon!
-T. Donna =)
>> My mom is the most special person in my life. But sometimes I hate my mother.
When my mom said something a little annoying to hear to me, when she criticizes me, when she complains that I did not, when my mom said that it was all my fault, and so on.
>> When my mom said something a little annoying for me to hear, when she criticizes me, when she complains that I did not do something, and when my mom said that it was all my fault, and so on, that is when I feel awkward about her.
At that times like this, I was really upset, really unpleasant, and sometimes I wanted to be annoyed by my mom by throwing things, but so far I\'ve never had that.
>> At that time, I was really upset, really feeling unpleasant, and sometimes I wanted to be annoyed by my mom by throwing things, but so far I\'ve never done that.
However, there is a reason that even a mother cannot be hated openly, because my mom is a very precious person to me now.
>> Correct!
Actually, I will have some midterm exam in the last week of this month, and I was very nervous and didn\'t know what to do because it was the first midterm of my life.
>> Correct!
My mother is like a guide that shows up when I\'m getting lost in my way, because my mom give some schedule to have good score in my midterm exam.
>> My mother is like a guide that shows up when I\'m getting lost in my way, because my mom gives some schedule to have a good score in my midterm exam.
For this reason, my mother is the most important person in my life.
>> Correct!
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