My mom’s best food.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, A-Rim! I got really hungry while reading your answers. Thank you so much for sharing about this! It would be awesome to get to try your mom\'s seafood pasta. I am sure it is delightful!
~ Teacher Marie
Title: My mom’s best food.
>> CORRECT.
My mom is a best cooker in my house.
>> My mom is the best cook in my house.
I think all of her food is very delicious.
>> I think all of her food are very delicious.
The best food is mom’s pasta.
>> CORRECT.
My favorite food is pasta, but her pasta is more delicious than restaurant’s.
>> My favorite food is pasta, and her pasta is more delicious than that of the restaurant’s.
One of the reason that I like hers is there are seafoods in pasta.
>> One of the reasons I like hers more is because there are seafoods in it.
I like shrimps the most, and mom put them on her pasta. So I love them.
>> I like shrimp the most and mom puts them on her pasta, so I love it.
If you have a time, visit my house and have some my mom’s seafood pasta!
>> If you have time, visit my house and have some of my mom\'s seafood pasta!
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.