My morning prayer every day. (1/2)

2021-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

학생이 쓴 원문

Thank God. Thank you for allowing me a new day today. I want to be your faithful son who always believes in you. Please also be with me anytime and anywhere today. Lead me to the right path. I pray for the safety of everyone with me today. May the Lord be in their hearts so that they can work safely today and return to a happy home without accidents. Please help us overcome the difficult company environment and let us always be honored by the Lord. Please keep my father and mother healthy. I pray to the LORD that until they go to heaven, let him live in praise.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

Thank you so much for sharing your prayer time ideas!

Have a great and safe day!

Teacher ELLY.

My morning prayer every day. (1/2)

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or>>My daily morning prayer.

Thank God.

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or>>Thank you Father God!
Thank you for allowing me a new day today.

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or>>Thank you for letting me live another day today.

I want to be your faithful son who always believes in you.

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or>>I want to be faithful to YOU. A son who always believes in YOUR existence and goodness.

Please also be with me anytime and anywhere today.

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or>>Please be near me also, at anytime and anywhere I will be today.

Lead me to the right path.
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or>>Direct my path to the right direction.
I pray for the safety of everyone with me today.

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or>>I ask that YOU make sure every person, who is with me today, will be safe and well.

May the Lord be in their hearts so that they can work safely today and return to a happy home without accidents.
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or>>May each o them keep the Lord in their hearts, so that they can work safely today and return to their happy families without any accidents.
Please help us overcome the difficult company environment and let us always be honored by the Lord.
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or>>Please help us overcome the difficult environment in the company, and always honor us with YOUR PRESENCE, LORD.
Please keep my father and mother healthy.

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or>>Thank YOU for keeping my father and mother healthy.

I pray to the LORD that until they go to heaven, let him live in praise.

>>I pray to the LORD that until they go to heaven, let them live praising YOU.

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