My morning prayer every day.(2/2)
학생이 쓴 원문
I pray for my son, daughter and wife. First of all, thank you for making me have a lovely family. Minseo and Byungjoo, please take care of their health and don\'t stress yourself with their studies and learn many things with good teachers and friends. May my wife be healthy and be a person who lives in harmony with the people around her.
Lord, now I am going into the world. Let me live thinking of the Lord whenever and wherever.
I prayed in the name of Jesus who is always with me. Amen.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thank you again for sharing your prayer topic.
Have a nice afternoon!
Teacher ELLY.
My morning prayer every day.(2/2)CORRECT!
or>>My daily morning prayer.
I pray for my son, daughter and wife.
CORRECT!
or>>I say a prayer for my son, daughter and wife.
First of all, thank you for making me have a lovely family.
CORRECT!
or>>Firstly, I want to thank YOU for the lovely family you have given me.
Minseo and Byungjoo, please take care of their health and don\'t stress yourself with their studies and learn many things with good teachers and friends.
>>I lift unto you Minseo and Byungjoo, please take care of their health so that they won\'t stress themselves with their studies. Instead, may they learn many things with good teachers and they will also meet nice friends.
May my wife be healthy and be a person who lives in harmony with the people around her.
>>May my wife stay healthy and be a person who lives in harmony with the people around her.
Lord, now I am going into the world.
>>May my wife stay healthy and be a person who lives in harmony with the people around her.
Lord, now I am going into the world.
CORRECT!
or>>Lord, right now, I am working with people who are full of the world.
Let me live thinking of the Lord whenever and wherever.
>>Let me live thinking about the Lord around the clock.
or>>Help me think of you Lord all the time, while I\'m in the world with different kinds of people.
I prayed in the name of Jesus who is always with me. Amen.
>>I pray in the Name of Jesus who is always with me. Amen.
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