My Morning Routine
학생이 쓴 원문
I’m very busy when I wake up in the morning. So, to be honest, I didn’t feel anything in the morning. The first thing after I wake up is drinking water, and I started to cooking my breakfast in myself. I usually eat the greek yogurt with fruits or the oatmeal. These are my favorite foods.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kate!
Thank you for working hard to improve yourself.
Please take note of the suggestions below.
If you have any questions, please ask in class.
I hope you continue practicing so that you can make yourself a better speaker and writer.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I’m very busy when I wake up in the morning.
>> Correct
So, to be honest, I didn’t feel anything in the morning.
>> So, to be honest, I don\'t feel anything in the morning.
The first thing after I wake up is drinking water, and I started to cooking my breakfast in myself.
>> The first thing I do after I wake up is drinking water, and then I start to cook breakfast for myself.
I usually eat the greek yogurt with fruits or the oatmeal.
>> I usually eat Greek yogurt with fruits or oatmeal.
These are my favorite foods.
>> Correct
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