My most embarrassing moment!

2010-12-10 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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My most embarrassing moment! Only people can feel embarrassing that's why we are always studying. That is no exception for me. When I took the OPIc test for the first time two years ago, I was really really embarrassed. Because I didn't answer but a few sentences introducing myself, the time was felt as a long time to me. I just liked to quit the test and escape that moment. Right after that, I signed up an English class and started studying so far. I'm going to take the test again in a few months. I hope to achieve my goal, Intermediate high level. I still have a long way to go but can do it. If I speak well, it will thank to the embarrassed moment.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! Wow! What a nice composition. The only thing I would tell you is don’t be embarrassed. Your experience is just a part of learning a different language. Just be confident and study hard. Take care T. Shy My most embarrassing moment! >>My most embarrassing moment. My most embarrassing moment!>>My most embarrassing moment.Only people can feel embarrassing that's why we are always studying. >>Only people can feel embarrassed, that is why we are always studying. >>People are the only ones that can feel embarrassed, that is why we are always studying.That is no exception for me. >>Correct!When I took the OPIc test for the first time two years ago, I was really really embarrassed. >>Correct! Because I didn't answer but a few sentences introducing myself, the time was felt as a long time to me. >>I didn’t answer much only a few sentences when I was introducing myself, that time seemed so long for me. I just liked to quit the test and escape that moment. >>I just  wanted to quit the test and escape that moment. Right after that, I signed up an English class and started studying so far. >>Right after that, I signed up for an English class and started studying.I'm going to take the test again in a few months. >>Correct! >>In a few months, I will be taking that test again. I hope to achieve my goal, Intermediate high level. >>I hope to achieve my goal, to get intermediate high level in the OPIc test. I still have a long way to go but can do it. >>correct.If I speak well, it will thank to the embarrassed moment. >>If I can speak well, I will be thankful to that embarrassing moment.

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