My most expensive gift
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When I was kindergarten, I had been into Lego. My parents bought me many kinds of legos at that time. One day, I got a Lego building named Sanctum Sanctorum. I don’t remember exactly how much it was, but I know it was very expensive. It takes 4hours to make that sets by myself. The Lego building is big and amazing. That is on my desk now.
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>> When I was in kindergarten, I had been into a Lego store. My parents bought me
many kinds of legos at that time. One day, I got a Lego building named
Sanctum Sanctorum. I don’t remember exactly how much it was, but I know
it was very expensive. It takes 4 hours to make that set by myself. The
Lego building is big and amazing. That is on my desk now.
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