My mother and father are good at cook.
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My mother and my father both are good at cook, my father is good at Korean food, and my mother is good at lunch box. In the picture, the lunch box, and chocolate are made by my mother, and another is made by my father. They are very very good at visual. My parents are really the best because the visuals are not the only ones but the taste is good. I\'m very proud of me, because I met my parents who are the best among the best.
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Hello Maria!
First of all, I felt so hungry when I was checking this composition because I cannot help looking at the food as they really look so delicious!
Anyway, that explains why you are very healthy and smart because they give you the best nutrition and education.
I admire both of your parents for what they do to love and take care of you and your brother.
Thank you for sharing your answers and the sumptuous photos of these food!
See you next week!
-T. Donna =)
>> My mother and my father are both good at cooking. My father is good at Korean food, and my mother is good at preparing lunch box.
In the picture, the lunch box, and chocolate are made by my mother, and another is made by my father.
>> In the picture, the lunch box and chocolates are made by my mother and the other is made by my father.
They are very very good at visual. My parents are really the best because the visuals are not the only ones but the taste is good.
>> Correct!
Or: They are very, very good at visuals. My parents are really the best because the visuals are not the only ones but also the taste.
I\'m very proud of me, because I met my parents who are the best among the best.
>> I\'m very proud of them, because I have my parents who are the best among the best.
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